Joda stilig dette, men jeg blir dratt bort fra uttrykket til modellen av lyset på venstre side. Skulle jeg foreslå noe måtte det være at du laget et litt smalere utsnitt.
mvh Nils

generally I like the use of very selective dof in close-portraits - and you have chosen one natural focus-point. In this image, to my mind you have a small problem with the composition. Due to the selective dof you have basically two areas of main interest - the eye - and the light behind her head on the right side.
To me, it feels like that this is dragging the attention to quickly out of the image - away from the overall impression.
I think the left side of the image has a lot of potential - at least I do like the light in, and behind the hair.
This photo works much better when seen in full-screen – and with some distance to the monitor.
Nice colour-combination !

dette var et meget fint utført portett bildet...får tanker om disko og diskotek her...moderne med tanke på bakgrunn og lys...

Godt arbeid, Ingolf!


Gerry

Flott blikk og modell.

Fin skarphet og fine farger.
Ville valgt ett enda tettere utsnitt for å unngå mest mulig forstyrrende lys og bakgrunn.

Du har fanget ett tøft uttrykk.

Keep up the good work.

Mvh Johnny